i was at home on the computer and the doorbell rang.so i thought whatever its just my grandma.so i keep reading my creepy pasta.then i hear it again.omg!!!i thought so i went to open the door.a man in a black suit stood at my door.so i do what other kids do.shut the door and go back to my laptop.after the knocking stoped(ya it went on)i went to my bedroom to sleep.all of a sudden i fall strait asleep like ivtaken a pill or something.i feel myself fall into a black abyss.it felt like forever!then i wake up and someone is hoovering over me.jeff the killer of course.i can hear him say go to sleep.i wake up again.but this time im in an insane asylum.men in white coats everywhere.so here i am typing to you.
-paitient 149
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February 13, 2013 at 3:14 pm
Right, why do you people insist on wasting the admin’s time? There are so many other stories that are worthy of his time and need his attention and you go and send in this unpolished turd. If this is some kind of troll/spoof it isn’t funny, just sad. But if this is real, i’m surprised you can even read…my score is 1 because I cannot give it minus one.
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February 13, 2013 at 10:34 pm
My faith in humanity has just been wiped into shreds.
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February 14, 2013 at 3:06 am
If only there was a rating lower then one…. The admin should really make that, just saying. Either that, or just putting one star was a bad idea. This was not even a good pasta and like Mr. Cox has stated, this was much of a troll and probably a waste of time to the admins. Saddest thing though, is that most of the trolls are hilarious. Yours on the other hand, left me wanting less.
Things to fix:
Mainly the whole thing. I would say do a different topic…
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February 15, 2013 at 3:50 am
“i wake up and someone is hoovering over me.jeff the killer of course.”
Actually, that was really nice of Jeff to do some vacuuming for you. He probably should have chosen a better time than when you were sleeping, though.
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February 16, 2013 at 6:05 am
Guys, I actually think this might be a true story. It says it was written by a mental hospital patient. I think it would take an insane person to write this horrible pasta.
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February 18, 2013 at 3:51 am
My eyes. They burn.
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February 20, 2013 at 1:44 am
If there was a person wearing a suit ringing my doorbell, I’d probably let them in or ask them what they wanted…I wouldn’t just close the door and go back to my computer.
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March 30, 2013 at 3:29 pm
well what would you expect from an author who so nonchalantly ignores his grandmother while she’s ringing the door bell.
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February 27, 2013 at 2:37 pm
Time to make a creepy pasta about Abyss.it, basically some entity (it’s always a fucking entity) gets a kid to write a shittypasta with a link in it, you follow it, and lo and behold YOUR NEXT submission is on here…
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March 18, 2013 at 4:37 am
Cut your damn hands off!
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March 18, 2013 at 11:35 pm
So you thought your grandma was knocking at your door, and didnt let her in?lovely grandchild she has, eh?
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March 30, 2013 at 12:53 am
m so scard!!11111111111!!1
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April 7, 2013 at 7:51 pm
Dang it that’s scary! Jeff the killer was hoovering over him!
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June 10, 2013 at 7:16 am
I went to “abyss.it”. I don’t even know what it was.
…And in this corner!
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