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Gilt.

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soft and sweet the killer weeps,
through the shadows she dose creep.
through the mirrors and the floor, she isn’t human any more.

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  1. This took you like what…. 4 seconds to write? Plus I’m not even sure you even have the title right…. Guilt maybe??? Not sure what Gilt is… but even if it was guilt, the title would not even fit……..

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  2. “Gilt” actually refers to something that has been covered in gold. So, we must ask, is three-line poem about that girl from Goldfinger?

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  3. Meh.
    Badly seperated lines.
    “dose creep” … Yea, she dose off.

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  4. Phuckthis.

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  5. Nice story. Thee sentences and I can still count 3 fucking spelling and grammar errors.

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  6. Kill the killers might apply, but the story is so fucking short I can’t tell.

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  7. Poe-try again.

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  8. OMG Poetry is sooo easy guys.

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  9. Man, this pasta is so short, l can’t even select it properly on my phone screen :c

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