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What Happened After?

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I was slowly regaining conciseness. My head throbbed and there was a sharp pain every time I breathed. I looked around and noticed I was in what looked like a hospital room. Wait… why am I in a hospital? I sat up witch was a horrid decision. My head spun and I felt sick. Moments later a young woman walked into my room. “Finally you’re awake!” She had a soft voice. That friendly sounding one that I could’ve sworn I had heard before. She had deep red hair, bright green eyes and had the face of an eighteen year old. I looked up at her and she smiled back. Her teeth were sharp and jagged. I jumped and she laughed “The doctor will be with you. We will be seeing each other soon.” She left the room and I sat back, still processing what had just happened. A few minutes passed and the doctor walked in. Now I defiantly know him. He was my doctor when I was littler. “Doctor Garison? Is that you?” I asked as he approached my bed. He smiled at me, “I’m glad you remember me. If you don’t mind me asking, what is the last think you remember?” I sat up, trying to remember. “I remember Jeff coming home from the hospital after the fight with Randy, We had dinner and I went to bed. I remember waking up and hearing screams and then Jeff came into my room. Then… nothing.” I looked at him and he stared at me like I had just said I was an alien. He spoke to me in a comforting tone, “Liu, you were in a car accident. You were on the way home and then crashed. You don’t have a brother either.” I sat up, in a rage I never had felt before. How could he lie to me…”Yes I do! His name is Jeffery! He’s my younger brother.” Doctor Garison shook his head, “No son, you have been in a coma for almost three weeks now, you had major head trauma. Would you like to talk to your parents?” I nodded, not looking at him and he left the room. I don’t remember a car crash but maybe it’s because I’ve been out for three weeks. Garison walked back in followed by a young woman and an older looking man. These were defiantly not my parents. The woman walked over to me and smiled. Thank god she looked normal. “You ready to go home Liu?” I nodded and she continued, “The doctor said if you wanted you could come home in the morning.” I smiled and yawned. I looked at the clock above the door and it said 9:46. They noticed my yawn and my “mother and father” left the room along with the doctor. I laid back and thoughts flooded my brain. A car crash… Jeff not existing… fake parents…It’s all so strange. Especially that nurse… was I just seeing things or did she really look like that. And what did she mean by “we’d be seeing each other soon”. Weird, At least I was going home in the morning. Maybe things will be better tomorrow. Ya, maybe I just need to rest. It’ll be better tomorrow. I closed my eyes and slowly drifted to sleep.

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  1. What did I just read?

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  2. Stupid JTK pasta. I didn’t even bother reading the whole thing and I know what it’s worth.

    1/10 and a downvote.

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  3. Terrible grammar!!!! *throws a table in rage* …. *looks at your pasta and speaks with a low, angry voice.* Why didn’t you use the creepy sauce?? You just had to use the crappy sauce, huh? Seriously, not even a whole bottle of creepy sauce could save this. >:3 My work here is done.

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  4. I defiantly did not enjoy this, witch is weird because it was so well executed.

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  5. Oh, look,more Jeffpasta.

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  6. It’s a good thing you regained conciseness, I can’t stand people that aren’t brief.

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  7. As soon as it says jeff the killer, I just exit, cause nothing good can come from reading more

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