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Hate unleashed part 1

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Hate unleashed part 1, written by: Jared w. Withrow
I was driving home from a football game with Susan, my wife, We were tired as all hell. We arrived after a short car ride, and threw ourselves onto the bed and quickly fell asleep. As I woke up I remembered we had to go to a birthday party for my old English teacher’s son. I got up and walked into the bathroom where my wife was getting ready and greeted me with a “It’s about time you woke up, We’re going to be late, babe.” So I quickly stuck my toothbrush in my mouth, put my pants on, spit the toothpaste out, and applied deodorant. Then we were on our way. Upon arriving I noticed my best friend standing in the doorway to Mrs. Lovett’s house. “You son of a bitch, You’re a sight for sore eyes! I haven’t seen you since high school!” He yelled to me as I got out of my car. I replied with a “Yeah, You’re looking good too, John! You got a bit fat, Who got bald?” He chuckled, since we were too young to go bald anyway, he laughed harder. We eventually got out of there after bringing Mrs. Lovett’s son his gift, a G.I. Joe action figure, Cause that’s what was cool when I was a child. We got home and I turned on my Xbox and threw in Black ops for some zombies game time. But, something happened when I started the game: The slenderman showed up on the screen. I just turned off the xbox thinking that it was a troll move from the company who made the game. So I went to bed. I woke up the next morning remembering a dream I had, it was a dream mostly of death. I noticed my wife was gone, So I walked all around the house to look for her. After convincing myself she went out to get milk, I sat down and turned on the TV. To my surprise they were covering a story on my street, saying to evacuate as soon as possible. So I ran out to get in my car to go look for Susan. My car was missing, Susan had taken it. So I ran down the road and to the right, As soon as I hit the high way I kept running. I soon reached the high school, where I saw several dead bodies, I had no idea what was going on, but still, I kept running, until I accidentally tackled a tech guy who was stationed two roads down from the high school. He said people had been committing suicide all over the place for no reason. Confused I ask, “Why?” He then stated that no one knows. Our conversation was cut short by a loud scream coming from the driveway of the high school, The tech guy and I ran over as quickly as we could to find that my best friend killed himself, He jumped in front of a woman’s car. Shaken up a bit, I have her move her car and I pulled him off the ground and buried him in the woods nearby with the help of the tech guy. After we buried him, We walked back to coroner street, where the tech guy had set up a camp for those willing to stay. I noticed my wife sitting in a bench by a very tall tree, I ran over. “Are you alright?” I asked, In a calm voice she said “Yes, I am fine” And out of the corner of my eye I see a little girl at the top of that tall tree that must have gone up about 100 ft. She jumped, I ran over to try and catch her and saw a large tentacle like arm extend from the darkness of the forest, Grab the child, and slam her onto the ground at what looked like 400 MPH. Her blood splattered all over the ground and I, Her head had exploded on impact, like one of those fire cracker things you throw at the ground. I looked over at the forest and saw the Slender man, Standing there menacingly. I walked over to my wife and said “What’s happening? What’s going on?” “A better world is emerging.” Was her chilling reply. Just as I looked at her, a pale, white man with dark hair stabbed right through her head, I screamed, But All I heard after that was “Sleep well, fucker.” He ran away into the woods. Blood drained out of her head as she fell to the ground. I caught her, and whispered “It’ll be okay, baby, I promise. Everything will be okay.” While sobbing and feeling sick to my stomach, the world grew darker, and a voice grew loud inside of my head. It said with a low tone: “We have been released, Hate has been unleashed.”
Stay tuned for part 2!

Credit To: Jared w. Withrow
Credit Link: https://www.facebook.com/thejww96

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  1. … NO MULTIPLE PART PASTAS!

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  2. If you are going to write a story like this, then post it on Quotev, it’s not meant for Creepy Pasta! On Quotev you can post as many parts as you want, and have crappy writing.

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  3. Stay tuned for part tw- oh crap they all killed themselves…

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  4. I’m so thankful part 2 just didn’t happen, there’s only so much shonky writing one can handle.

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  5. I’m really sorry thus sucks guys, I’ve been regretting it. I want to put out part two, but I think I’ll re–write or just forget it. I wanted to kill slender man by the end. I’m sorry all.

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