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A few days ago I was driving home from my girlfriends house and a white car followed up to about 5 miles away from my house. I was creeped out by this but I let it slip my mind.

Two weeks have passed and I was at my fathers house, checking up on the cat and cleaning a bit. On my way home that same car followed me, all the way home but he drove past my driveway. I was relieved to see him drive past but as I went to unlock the door I saw the break lights on that car then reverse lights. I was gasping heavily but they just backed into an opposite driveway. A sigh of relief as I unlocked the door and went inside. Everyone was asleep. I went to my room and went to sleep. I awoke to the smell of eggs and bacon. “Mom you making breakfast!” there was no answer when I yelled downstairs I was a little scared then a voice “No, dad!” So I got downstairs, ate breakfast then went to do some errands.

It has been a while since I was followed, so I guess I’m safe. Wait. That car pulled into the driveway. I woke I guess that was just a nightmare I went to wake my sleeping parents when they didn’t get up I pulled off the covers over them…they has no insides, just the body cavity. That white car is in the driveway, I tried to sleep when I did I smelled eggs and bacon. I didn’t yell, I didn’t eat I just went outside and went for a walk. I was gone for hours when I came back there was no white car. I sighed of relief.

Tonight I found a disturbing note, I destroyed it right after reading it. I don’t remember much except the last line, it read: “You are not going to need to eat today because I’ll have your stomach” I don’t believe that, that white car is here though and my mom and Don are still laying dead, I don’t know what will happen I just hope I have some time to say, if you’re ever followed by this car here is how you stop what has happened to me youhdgft;?,;

Don’t eat tonight because I’ll have your stomach…I’m outside your house you may want to lock the door

Credit To: Dane

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  1. Utter crap, horribly written and just plain bad.

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  2. Welp, my folks are dead, time to take a walk and then do nothing.

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  3. I don’t even know what to say. This isn’t even remotely creepy or scary. I guess it doesn’t help that when I read “white car” all I can picture in my mind is a white ’91 Ford Escort, probably because that was the first new car I ever bought. If you’re going to write something that might scare someone, or at least creep them out, you need to give us some details on why a white car following you is scary. Was something about the car scary? And it really goes without saying but if anyone were to find their parents laying gutted in their bed they would probably freak out, call the cops, something like that.

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  4. A great new diet if you ask me.

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  5. I don’t know what you guys are talking about. Finding your parents gutted in your bed is totally normal. Don’t overreact.

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