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I Hate You

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I hate you when you dress in your dirty, unfathomable rags.
I hate you when you bathe.
I hate you when you wage a violent, courageous protest.
I hate you when you stand there silent.
I hate you when you when you refuse to spend your stolen money.
I hate you when you spend too much.
I hate you when you say hate is such a strong, unnecessary word.
I hate you when you disagree with me.
I hate you when you call me a liar, an irresponsible creature.
I hate you when you say my name.
You think I hate you when you call me butcher,
I hate you most when you call me mom.

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11 Comments

  1. I hate you when you write a pasta that is a paragraph long and has no story.

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  2. Another one that’s only about bad home life. While it’s unfortunate if that’s the case, there are a lot of people who have a bad home life, (or think they do) and many have written about it. It’s to the point (at least, for me) where the stories about abuse and bullying and all that have just gotten old. Even if you were the first to write about that, it would still fail to be creepy. Sure, some abuse can be scary, but creepy and scary are NOT the same thing.

    I doubt most people take the same stance as me as far as stories like this go, (mostly because I’m a bitter old man) but almost no one thinks these things are scary.

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    • I’m actually totally with you when it comes to bullying/revenge stories, mostly because the revenge never seems justified. Either the bullies are so one-dimensional that they aren’t believeable, or the victim is only sympathetic to the author. It’s not scary and most of the time it smacks of a spoiled child who didn’t get their way and is throwing a tantrum.

      However, for this poem, it just feels bland. It can be summed up like this: Bad mother hates her child all the time. There needs to be more to it than that.

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    • I have no complaints here… sure, my life isn’t “bad” and I have never been “abused”; but I can say that it does suck and I really wish it would change for the better at least once.

      But yes, this pasta is complete garbage and is more or less; a diary that should be kept closed.

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  3. Umm… waiter? I ordered pasta, not a tiny bowl of bland sauce.

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  4. It’s a nice poem and everything, but it’s not really scary. As the others have said, this is bland in the terms of creepiness. I don’t write many poems (Poetry was never my strong suit) so I wish I could be more help to edit this. I guess just add more creepiness and such.

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  5. I can’t quite figure out what this is. A poem? Abuse story?

    For one thing, you have the mother hating the child for the vaguest and strangest of things that even contradict each other (if anything it’s a parent’s dream for a child to stand still and stay quiet). This is not an abuse tale, it’s insignificant pet peeves. Pathetic, even for the shitty type of pasta this represents.

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  6. I would class this as a poem, but honestly I can’t tell. It doesn’t even try to rhyme.

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    • It doesn’t have to.

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  7. Poe-try again.

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  8. Is this even a pasta i dont even

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