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jeff in my dreams

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after reading all creepypasta’s about Jeff the killer it was late so I went to sleep I have a weird dream. In the dream I was some guy who was sitting next to a computer there was some thing on the computer it was a video.The video was almost done but it was pause at the end I unpause it and in the video red text popped up the text said “GO TO SLEEP” I don’t know why but I think I’ve seen this before but just as I try was remember where I seen that I heard someone scream in the house it sound like someone was getting hurt!? I went to see where that scream come from. I find a door where there was blood on it and just as I was opening the door there was a bat in my hand. I didn’t know I had this in my hand but I didn’t care I opened the door I almost scream there was a girl on the floor death she was covered in blood and naked the room then lighted with red light there were words on the walls of the . I then remember where I seen and heard this from ! It’s was from Jeff is back a story I red also I realest that I am the guy in the beginning of the story! When I was about to read the words on the wall I heard a very creepy laugh behind me I turned round it was Jeff and he has a knife in has hand ! he said “go to sleep” I screamed he come at me with the knife he stabbed me with the knife I passed out. when I wake up I was back to my normal myself and I a hospital and my friend J.M. was next to me she say that the neighbors call polices because they heard screaming and when the police went in to your house they find me on the floor passed out so the they took me here. I was happy that nightmare was over but me be happy didn’t still long as the doctor came in to the room the doctor said my friend had to go in to the waiting room so she left the room. I was alone with the doctor that’s when I asked the doctor of how I passed out and his said “it because you didn’t go to sleep” wait I know someone who would say something like that ! The doctor was really Jeff dressed as a doctor I scream he try to come at me with a knife but there was a table next to me so I pushed the table in to him then run out of the room I then saw my friend J.M. and grabbed her and ran while I was running with J.M. from Jeff I thought this wasn’t real but if this is real then I should run faster ! Just as me and J.M. were running Jeff throw his knife the knife then hit J.M. in the back she was slowly dying she said go on with out her and then she die I cried next to her dead body that when Jeff say “you should of gone to sleep” just as he say that I ran he take’s out the knife from J.M. back and runs after me until I run to the roof of the hospital “there’s no another place to run it’s time to go to sleep!” Jeff says I that it there was no place to run I knew I was doomed then i stepped back on till i fell off the edge of the roof then I find myself next to my bed and on the floor then my mom come in to the room and she said “are you ok you fell out of bed” I say to my mom that I was ok very ok.

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19 Comments

  1. That was the worst writing I have seen in quite some time. Congrats.

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  2. I also had a weird dream. Me, two Irish dudes, Jeff The Killer, a witch from Left For Dead 2, and Aubrey Plaza were in a band. That’s doesn’t mean it’s real.

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  3. I don’t know what is scarier, the lack of punctuation or the grammar. I mean, there were 3 or 4 periods throughout the whole pasta, and I am not including the ones in the J.M. Now, I can tell you are young, for I went to your DA and that is the only explanation I can come up with on how someone could write something this bad. Please, improve your writing, come up with something original, and then maybe you can submit stuff online. For now, this was just….bad. I mean, really bad.

    Also, Derp, this should go under We’re Not Your Dream Dictionary.

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    • Thanks!

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      • you stole my story!!!!

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        • …is this another instance of people forgetting that they submitted and accusing themselves of plagiarism?

          I mean, the submission came from the same email you’re commenting with and the credits even match, so clearly this originated from you.

          How does this even happen?

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          • Oh. I see. It’s another one that thinks that every single pasta is written by you, derp.

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        • Why would you even admit this is your story?

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    • I think the scariest part of it is that with 23 votes this tripe is only at a -5.

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  4. I love how you wrote this incoherently. It really feels like a dream, because of how it’s written in a way that you can follow, but not very well. You are clearly an artistic genius.

    Really, though, I just don’t feel like spending time critiquing this one, because the author could read most of the more helpful comments on this site, and they would work with their pasta.

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  5. Dreams can be creepy as I once dreamed of my mother spasming on the floor and her head was shaking and she was just opening and almost closing her mouth and she sounded like she was choking.
    Of course that is what I call creepy, or other things like I’m exploring caves, I’m a spelunker and I see humanoids walking on all fours on their skinny, lanky limbs with with somewhat little bit longer fingers than a normal human’s hand. They look at the ground searching for blind crayfish with dim light coming from their eyes and moans just echoing against the cave walls, they use echo-location to find me, my character stumbles back in shock as one of them snaps their head to my location and wail. My character backs up in shock and falls off a ledge with his back facing the floor and right when my character hits the ground, I wake up. With a sore back.

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  6. Why my stage play version didn’t get posted? Me dissapoint… Derpbutt, please post it. I am not trying to sumbit a pasta, it’s just a really long comment.

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  7. Good try.

    Not good though, not good at all.

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  8. Is it bad I laughed? Because I did… this is actually so bad its funny. :P

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  9. that my creepypasta story!!!

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    • Yes. This is what happens when you submit to creepypasta.com and check the option that has me post rejected pastas on crappypasta.com in hopes of getting feedback.

      You even received an email explicitly detailing this and directly linking you here. I am not sure how you are possibly confused by this result.

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  10. …..and it was all a dream. The End.

    I’m not “ok very ok.” Not after reading this.

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  11. You should’ve thanked your friend for letting you know that your neighbors called the “polices”. Glad to hear that you are “ok very ok”
    ;)

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  12. This was stupid. It’s not difficult to understand why it’s stupid considering the idiocy displayed in the comments section by the author.

    Author, why the heck would anyone want to steal your pasta. It’s rubbish.

    1/10 and a downvote.

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