Some people say murders are prepared for a reason. But nobody knows why this thing killed everyone. They didn’t know it’s gender. But they did know one thing. This..thing..had a passion. A passion for killing. And it all happened because he watched his father murder his mother.
One Saturday night, a boy named Louis was upstairs in his bedroom trying to sleep. His parents had been fighting all night long and he couldn’t sleep.
That’s when Louis heard screams. Screams coming from downstairs. Louis jumped out of his bed and sat at the stairs, looking at his parents through the banister. In awestruck, Louis watched as his father slit his mothers throat. Kicking her, punching her, stabbing her. Louis started crying hard. He had always thought his mother was going to live forever. Louis ran downstairs and tried pulling his father away from her. But he turned around and stabbed his son in the eye. Louis screamed loudly. As his father pulls the knife out, the eye goes along with it. Blood, pouring directly from Louis’s face. He tried screaming and crying to his father but he wouldn’t listen.
That’s when a feeling went straight through Louis’s body. He grabbed the butcher knife from the kitchen, and slammed it straight into his fathers head. Blood gushes out and pours down the floor.
“You son of a bitch!” Louis screams, and continues shoving the knife into his fathers body.
“You fucking murdered her! You mother fucker!” Louis screams and finishes his father off.
Now, intestines lay all over the floor and blood is splattered onto Louis’s pajamas. He runs over to his mother and cries. She was breathing, but not enough to stay alive.
“Son, h-how could you?” she whispered. Those were her last words until her heart stopped pounding. Suddenly, Louis turns from his little boy figure into a murderer. A grin appears on his face as he walks out of his house and into the dark woods.
Ten years later, Louis is now a seventeen year old boy. He’s out on the loose. Murdering people.
Another Saturday night, Louis heads out into the streets until he finds a teenage girl.
“What’re you doing out here alone?” the girl asked Louis.
“I should be asking you the same thing,” he whispers and grabs her wrist. He drags her into the woods and guts her. But she stll breathes.
“Please! Help!” she screamed at the top of her lungs.
Louis smirks, grabs the butcher knife, and chops her head off. Pouring alcohol over her body, he throws a lighter at her until she’s fully burning.
And Louis runs.
As fast as he can.
Beware.
Louis is still out there.
If you ever see him, just call the police. Make sure your windows are locked.
And one word of advice?
Don’t look behind you.
If you dare..

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October 30, 2012 at 2:06 am
Why is a seven year old boy saying "fucking" anything? Also, how about some background on Louis up until this point? Maybe a best friend that helps maintain his sane side? Why were his parents fighting? Was his dad an alcoholic? Why did Louis suddenly have a butcher knife in his hand when he’s in his parents’ bedroom? Imagery, exposition, please.
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October 30, 2012 at 2:58 am
I you’re going to say that nobody knows why he started killing, don’t finish that paragraph with the explanation of why he started killing.
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October 30, 2012 at 4:21 am
In addition to what TempestTemple just said, you say no one knows the gender of the killer and in the next freakin’ sentence you tell us the killer is a boy named Louis!
Also, are you the same person that submitted the second Untitled story below this one? Because they are practically identical. If so, you suck x2.
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October 30, 2012 at 2:31 pm
Why the fuck is my first name in this story?!
I mean it!
WHY THE FUCK IS IT IN THE STORY!
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November 1, 2012 at 1:51 pm
You say to look out for Louis, but don’t give any description about him expect that he’s now Seventeen. Should I just call the police everytime I go to school?
Also the whole don’t look behind you thing, is really more supernatural than a serial killer.
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