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I Love You, My Brother- Prologue

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He runs home crying, not understanding what he did.  He can’t help that he’s different.  He has tried to be normal, but it doesn’t work, they laugh at him more.  He just can’t seem to blend in.  They always seem to seek him out and torment him.  He doesn’t understand how it is possible to escape from their searching eyes.  He can’t be normal.  So he decides to be the opposite.  They want him to be different?  Well he’ll give it to them.  Now they’ll get to laugh at him more.  He’ll give him every reason to torment him that they could ever think of.  He slips into the house, ignoring his sister who asks how his day was.  She’s the only one who knows what he goes through, but she won’t let him do what he’s planning.  He knows it.  She loves him to much.  The thought almost makes him hesitate, but he can’t.  He enters the bathroom and stares at his face, the last time he will ever see it.  His trembling hand takes the razor down from the shelf, and he begins his horrible job.  The pain makes tears drip out of his eyes, and he sobs silently.  His tears fall into the sink, mixing with the dark red blood, until he can’t see anything except blurred color.  The razor slips, and he cries out, drawing his sister’s attention.  He can hear footsteps up the stairs, but he can’t stop know.  His hand won’t stop, even if he tried.  The job is finally finished, and his whole body shakes uncontrollably, the horrible liquid still dripping into the sink.  When his sister opens the door, she can’t see his face.  His back is to her and his head bowed down, so the mirror doesn’t reflect anything.  She calls his name.  He knows he can’t hide it from her, and so he turns his head and stares at her, his thoughts blank.  She stifles a sob at his appearance, but steps forward.  “Oh Jeff, what did you do?” He starts sobbing harder, and she embraces him, at first hesitant, but then it is a sure hug, a comforting one.  And at that moment, he loves her more than ever.
Credit To – Maxey

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  1. Is there supposed to be something creepy in this steaming pile of human waste? Cause I don’t see it. Maxey, please just stop. JTK is poison to the internet.

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  2. JTK pasta.

    I was starting to think these had finally begun to dwindle. I’ve seen two today. They’re all shit. There’s not a single one that I’ve actually enjoyed or thought was worth more than 4 stars. Please try and use your imaginations. This isn’t a fanfic site, don’t treat it like one.

    1/10 and a downvote.

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  3. I expected some morbid incest fantasy…
    You are a dissapointment, Maxey.

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  4. I hate JTK, but at least this wasn’t the usual, “Oh my God, everyone hates me, I’m gonna kill my whole family and Jeff the Killer is going to give me the nod of approval and we are going to be bestest buddies forever and ever!” garbage. Points for being somewhat original, but it is still JTK, so boo. Also, God invented paragraphs for a reason.

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  5. This was so scary I ran into my room, got my unicorn stuffed animal, curled into a ball, and screamed. Thanks for this horrifying pasta. -3- *cough cough sarcasm cough* Just so you know, ‘She loves him to much.’ is incorrect spelling/grammar. It’s supposed to be ‘too’. + DON’T COOK JTK PASTA UNLESS YOU HAVE THE RIGHT INGREDIENTS TO MATCH THE RECIPE! -3- my work here is done.

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    • More like don’t make JTK stories at all.

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  6. This is one of those “one paragraph per chapter,” kind of story..

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  7. Stop it with the fanfics that AREN’T EVEN CREEPY.
    1/10 and a downvote.

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