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Mallory

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i woke up to find my house empty and silent it was creepy. i tried to go down the stairs but there were never ending stairs. i heard wailing from my sisters room but when i opened the door my sister was dead but the wailing was louder. i saw a little girl about 7 with a bloody dress that was long like a night gown. so i ran down the stairs but they never ended i could here the wailing getting louder and closer so i ran faster but fell. i got to the bottom some how i swore i saw a bloody name that sounded like the name mallory. the little girl appeared out of no where and stabbed me constantly, everything went black.

You can all guess what happend to me but i’ll tell you what. i woke up in a big white room and noticed a door so i went over to it but it was locked too bad i was locked in the room all alone with no food or water so i knew if no on saved me soon i would die. i tried my hardest to stay awake so if anyone came they would save me that’s when a window appeared with my family i started screaming for help but then mallory appeared and killed them and that’s when i woke up in my real house. It was a nightmare because when i went downstairs everyone was sitting there and then they started melting i swore i was dreaming again but no i wasn’t. my mom started yelling when everything was black and i woke up in a hospital to hear my mom saying he’s mad i tell you MAD!

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  1. Honestly, I wish I could give two-part pastas .5 stars each, so that the entire storyline would get a total of 1 star

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  2. To Be Continued should NEVER be used when writing a short story. Why do people do this? Do they think their story is so "amazing" that the world needs to get a taste of it before it’s even finished?

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  3. Does it hurt to use capital letters sometimes?????

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