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Silent Scarlet

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A young girl age 5 sat in her room as her father and mother were having another one of there fights “I HATE THAT THING UP IN HER ROOM I NEVER WANTED HER!” “SHE’S JUST A CHILD SAM!” “I DON’T CARE MARY! ALL THEY DO IS SCREAM AND MAKE A MESS!”. She heard her father coming upstairs, hugging her knees wile her father came in to her room in his hands he held is belt “This is for knocking over my coffe you little bich”.

13 years past nothing changed the young girl was now 18 and sat in her room drawing anime,gore,and anything that came in to her mind.She was homed schooled because it was hard for her to be with other children,they made fun of her for being so quiet they called her ‘Silent Scarlet’ they all poked her with insalting names and a few beatings before classes.her little sister Lucy came up to her big sister “”sissy when is mommy coming home?” “around two lucy don’t worry,I’m here” she gave her little sister a smile “ok!” lucy skipped out of the room.Two days passed “Lucy? Lucy!” scarlet called her sister, no reply “LUCY!?” no one answered “if your looking for lucy she’s outside” her father said. Scarlet went outside ‘LUCY COME INSIDE!” it was snowing out like allways. Scarlet saw a lump in the snow, She was puzzled walking near it she saw that it was her dead,grey,frezzing sister.Scarlet cried and hit the sink’s cornner “no, you are fine father made her sit there in the cold” she laughed “no this is what I want” she took a budder knife and stabed it in her eye,she felt no pain and when her eye was out her mother came in and rushed her to the hospitle.

A few days later she came back with no eye but you couldn’t see it because it was bandged a little blood on the goze that held the blood in her.that night she lay there in her bed soon she got up and had no control her self but could see what she was doing going into the basment she found a ice pick for when the ice got bad in the area around them. opicking it up she gripped the handle adrenaline raced through her vaines a dark chukle escaped her lips.

Walking slowly into her father’s room snoring could be heard.Her father in a deep sleep,Scarlet walked over to her father and lifed up the ice pick and before she slamded it into her fathers forhead she siad “hehe DON’T YOU REMEMBER ME DAD!?!?” and with that she slamed it into she fathers face,blood everywhare on her eskmo jackit and bandiges.she liked up the blood from her ice pick “good bye father” and with that she jumped out the window and ran into the the forest but met by a tall faceless man who saved her from dying in the dreaded forest.

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  • LulzDerp

    Sorry but this needs some work. First of all, the grammar is awful. Secondly, your spelling is pretty bad and lastly, this was a pretty lazy piece of work. Could of had so much potential but you threw it away. 3.2/10

  • Mr. Destluer

    Darling, I believe that you have a decent idea that is peaking it’s little head through this corpse of a story. Ignoring the spelling errors, it COULD be a very nice story. Darling, don’t rush the story so much! I wasn’t able to enjoy the story, and I usually can read a story despite misspellings because I have to read children’s stories, but I wasn’t able to enjoy it like I wished to, because you rushed key points and this destroyed the overall emotion of the piece. This story doesn’t scream “knock-off” to me like it was categorized, it was just poorly written. Focus more on the week leading up to her sister’s death and their father’s abuse, omit the eye and hospital scene, the pick ax for a weapon is signature enough. Make it so that the little girl was the only thing keeping Scarlet from going insane from her father’s torture. Also, you should make it so that Scarlet was not home-schooled, and go in more detail about the bullying, it adds to the reasoning leading up to the snapping moment. If you must make it so that Scarlet screams that stereotypical screech at the end of the story, at least have it so that the father is awake, already injured, crawling away, begging for his pathetic life.

    • KameKimmons

      Darling, I think you don’t read creepypastas that much, do you, darling? She got rescued from Slenderman, darling. The story is crap,darling. That’s why this this site is called crappypasta.com, darling.

    • Staring at walls = Fun

      This is a spinoff of Jeff The Killer. Fool.

  • Starkiller1086

    For god’s sake original author, you created another extremely cliché piece of crap. Honestly, I am sick of all self-inserts. I can show you how cliché this was with a simple check.
    Random bullies who just turn up- Check
    Abuse at home- Check
    Teenager/young adult who goes insane- Check
    Teenager/young adult kills family member(s)- Check
    Killer creates a crappy cry- Check

    1/10 and a downvote

  • SUPER ANIME KITTEN JEFF KAWAII DESU

    you has some nice garmmar. i like this story its go everthing like child abuse and gore and both of them are very well thought out. oh and those mean bullies are so realistic, bullies just like to hate on girls for no reason. anyway keep on wrting and youll get on creepypasta

    oh and guys im gonna start siging off with a kitty face

    =^w^=

  • Marisa

    First, try to use a few less cliches in your story. Second, change that nickname so I don’t automatically assume it’s touhou.

  • http://thoughtless-coffee.tumblr.com Becky

    bUDDER KNIFE

  • …….

    WHAT WAS THIS STORY??? it was crap!!

  • Demi Paras

    I’m so sorry, but this made me laugh. “She liked up the blood” was the best part.

  • Kitten

    TROLLOLOLOLOLOLOL

  • Moon Babe

    Please tell me this is a joke

  • namethatman

    So crappy I’m too lazy to write a pathetic review on your pathetic pasta.
    1/10 and a downvote.

  • http://redacted.co.vu RDCTD

    Wait, so this is just a worse version of an already bad, yet popular creepypasta. I didn’t think you could make Clockwork: Your time is up even worse.


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