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Test Subject

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Nov 21st 1944
“We’ve done it! We were able to fuse the genes of some of the deadliest animals in the world with a human soldier. This will be a huge break in the art of warfare for the whole world.

Nov 23 1944
“The subject seems to be able to adapt quickly. We’ve already taught him what out most soldiers learn in years in just a matter of hours. He has passed any standard we’ve set.”

Nov 26 1944
“I don’t know how it happened or why but all I know is that I’m going to die. The subject was fine in it’s chamber just a few days ago. A scientist walked up to it and was taking physical examinations and the subject asked”What was I made for?” The scientist replied to kill. I guess the subject was just trying to fulfill what it was made for. It just stood up and ripped the mans spine straight out. I don’t know much more. I just ran and hid in this room. If there are no more entries you know what has happened.

Dec 1 1944
“I’ve been in here to long. It’s all quiet,the monster must have left. I’m going to try and escape. I have a revolver and this combat knife. Maybe if I’m lucky the monster won’t even be here. If I die I just want you to know that I tried to stop it. Tell my family that…..”

The rest was hard too read due to the fact that it’s impossible to write while being torn to pieces.
Credit To – Jordan Sinclair
Credit Link - http://www.facebook.com/Hamboningisalifesaver?ref=hl

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5 Comments

  1. possibly a decent start to a decent pasta. With a little more details and explanations it could be good.

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  2. Cut scientist to pieces.
    This is my pasta short.

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  3. More details, not so short either it escallated very quickly and i didnt find it creepy at all. enhance details and more writing and background info on why they were doing and more entries would make this a better pasta

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  4. That last line makes me think this might’ve been a joke.

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  5. this has no redeeming qualities but great ending twist!

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