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The Beast of Kansas

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Based on a true story

imagine you are camping in the woods and you hear a stick break you quickly wake up your dad or mom your parent looks outside and sees nothing they say go to bed so you do a couple minutes later you jear another stick and another stick and so on getting closer every time you try to wake up your parent but they still say go to bed so you decide to investagate on your own you grab a flashlight and turn it on you look outside and see nothing but a bush blowing in the wind a couple minutes later you hear a growl you say it was just your imagination yu then hear another growl but closer this time you hear the zipper of your tent unzipping and a hairy head pops in you try to pretends it is a nightmare and eventually sleep while the creature is watching you yoy wake up ten minutes later to a deep breathing you look up and the creature is still there you scream and it runs off but not after you get a few picture you show your parents but they dont beleive you.
Credit To – Draven this was a personal encounter
Credit Link - dravenharper@gmail.com

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  1. Run on sentences galore. Also, try proof-reading a story before you post it, as there were many spelling errors as well.
    The “monster” also needed a better description than just saying it was hairy. Also, it doesn’t seem very scary. If all it did was stare at you, then ran off when you screamed, why should you be afraid of it? Honestly, it just seemed like some confused homeless guy to me.

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  2. So… the hairy beast stuck its head in your tent and you went back to sleep? Like, while it was staring at you? You should have been all, “Take a picture, it’ll last longer, monster man!”

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  3. Seriously? It’s a single run on sentence… LEARN TO USE A PERIOD. Sorry, but this must stop.

    On the story side, never start off with “Based on a true story.” NEVER. Way too cliche and a horrible attempt to make the fear last. The ending made no sense because big hairy monsters are not real, and you say you have proof, but don’t provide any evidence.

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  4. So this monster unzipped your tent while you were investigating outside

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  5. The only beasts that are in Kansas are the Westboro Baptist Cult.

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