Well it was august 18 2012. I had just gotten back from my girl friend’s house. And as im arriving at my home before i open the door a feel sad. Ignoring the feeling i open the door, And step inside but as soon as i did i stumbled some. Quickly standing back up i head for the bathroom figuring im just overly tired, I splash some water on my face and dry off when all the sudden i hear crying. This was a really sad cry the sound was that of a man, I yelled out “hello?” nothing dead silence even the crying seemed to stop. I quickly take out my phone to call my girl friend but…… there were no bars which wasn’t quite as weird as what happened next. i went outside for a short breather and saw a taller slender figure stretching to the sky. He appeared to be naked and had long stringy black hair reaching down his shoulders, His arms were long and slim almost like branches but not, and his legs were tall and slim to nothing odd about them though. So i get the dumb ass idea to yell at him ” hey buddy put some fucking cloths on!” He didn’t respond but i noticed the crying again. I began to feel sad again and i started to apologize ” hey look im sorry look man just come inside i can help you.” after i said that his head shot backwards and let out a horrifying scream. It seemed to have lasted for hours after he stopped it was ringing in my head. Then he charged at me , Frightened i dashed to get out of the way. The almost human figure ran off into my house crying all the way on all four. His fingers were long and sharp like talons but covered in flesh and made of bone like ares. I chased after him big mistake on my part…..After a hour of looking for him i couldn’t find him and that scream that horrible scream was still in my head, getting louder and louder, Soon after giving up i picked up the house phone to call the cops a strong voiced man with a croak answered “hello 911 whats you emergency.” I had to think what to say but i just blurted out “there’s this tall crazy guy in my house and he wont leave!” Then man soundly chuckled to himself “ok boy will be by soon stay calm.” we both hung up before they came i went up to my room. There i sat on the bed and tried to get my cell phone to work but still no signal, i got a call the caller id was anonymous i answered with a shy and slow “hello?” scared out of my shit the voice was of a girl screaming in the phone. I didn’t have the balls to hang up i was scared but i felt needed to listen to her. This continued till the cops arrived one slammed his door and silence fell the girl then spoke “the gates of hell are wide open.” she giggled like a four year old so sweet and innocent then stopped and and with a angry tone yelled ” you cant escape! we we will have your soul.” then the girl started laughing the line went dead but then i heard the police break down my front door! At the end of there investigation they fined me 50$ for prank calling but i knew he was still there. The screaming and crying got louder and louder i Just wanted to go death just so it would stop. So i i put in head phones connected to my mp3 and listen to some Metallica When in mid song it goes to a loud screech and and i hear that girls laughter again. I ripped them out of my ears and smashed my mp3 with a clock that was near by. I was shit tired and the voices and screams and laughter were getting louder i laid down in bed curled up in a ball completely covered in blankets. In my dreams i was in a dark plane of grass and trees far away, it was dark and the moon lit the ground. I saw more men like the screaming Tall Man all reaching there arms to the sky around some sort of altar that had fire in a circle in the middle of the altar which both were circles. I heard a mixture of the scream and the girl laughing then she appeared in front of me and separated me and the men. And as i looked closer in side the fiery circle in the center of the altar i could see a pile of bodies burning in the center of the altar and the Tall Men were crying more louder. Then all the sudden she raises her hands to the sky and all the trees catch flame and the bodies burst into ash and a monster arises from the altar, And grabs the women and throws him into his mouth which was hidden in the middle of a thousand tentacles. This monster was like two stories high and was black as night and had scales on his skin. He had four pure yellow eyes which glowed brighter and brighter with each pump of my heart. And his head was was like a serpent but with tentacles coming from the bottom of his head. I couldn’t move and i was scared as shit, Then he grabbed for me and i awoke. And what should i find in the corner of my room but the Tall Man which i now call “The Blood Weepers” he Walked on all fours over to my bed and as he did i inched back till i hit my back against the wall. He slashed his long knife like fingers against my torso and forced me to lay down facing upward. Blood was everywhere and i was yelling in pain, And his crying got louder as my yells of death creeping pain wailed out, Then he drew a creepy smile and bit opened his jaws exposing 150 small and sharp angled teeth. Then without warning he bit down on my neck and ripped a giant chunk of flesh and muscle and as he did i watched him swallow a part of my body down, Then i saw his dark blood filled hands grip the sides of my torso and bite down into my stomach and pulls out as much he can. Then everything went black and i began to feel worse pain and i realized i was in hell just like the women said and that’s how i died
The Blood Weepers,
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November 7, 2012 at 9:13 pm
uh-huh. It gave me the chills. Just make sure you have better usage of punctuation next time.
January 28, 2013 at 1:33 am
Please use paragraphs next time. This hurt my eyes to look at.
February 5, 2013 at 8:43 pm
At least it wasn’t a slenderpas- oh wait, it was a slenderpasta.
Also, the ending reminded me of ‘High School’ an equally horrible pasta. Let’s compare their endings, shall we?
High School: Then i realised, i was in hell.
This pasta: and i realized i was in hell just like the women said and that’s how i died
Seem similar?
March 19, 2013 at 12:43 am
Go Weepinbell! Destroy that pasta with razorleaf!