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the cat

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One day a little boy was staying home while his mother went to the store. He was sitting on the couch in their living room when he heard a small thump coming from upstairs. Naturally thinking it was there cat which always would jump off his bed he went to go check. When he went to go check his room there was no cat in his room.
He then went back down stairs where somehow the channel was changed to the movie Friday the thirteen. The scene where a mangled looking Jason jumps out of the lake at the beginning keeps repeating. After repeating about five times he hears the sound that plays when Jasons about to murder someone which sounds a little like chee chee chee chee koo koo koo koo.
Scared he tries to turn the tv off put it won’t let him. He then hears from his room again meow meow meow which goes on for several minutes each time getting deeper in tone then goes higher in pitch . He goes to go investigate.
On the stairs is what seems to be his cats organs neatly put on each step with the cats mangled head sitting at the top still meowing with blood dripping each time the cat meows.  The boy walks up stairs trying not to step on his cat’s organs.
When he gets up stairs at the end of the upstairs hallway he sees a little girl with black hair over her face and a visible red eye which is bleeding. She starts to crawl towards him with the bones in her arms sticking out. She is crying out the word “soon” over and over again in a scratchy slow horrifying way. The boy runs down stairs outside and into the yard where his mother’s car is there blood on the windshield and his mother’s mangled body.

Credit To – charlyhorse

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7 Comments

  1. Would be better if it had more details. Like more about the zombie girl, and how the organs were organized. (AKA the heart was on the first, liver on second, eyeball on third, kidneys on fourth, intestines on fifth, and head on sixth). Also describe the mangled mom.

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  2. <- A man with a bleeding mouth.

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  3. “One day a little boy was staying home while his mother went to the store.”

    This one sentence really ruins the whole story. The kid doesn’t have a name and why would a mother leave a LITTLE kid at home on his own?

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  4. Unrealistic in every way imaginable.

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  5. Noooooo¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mr cat is d d dead:’(

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  6. this is more sad than creepy. I thought that the jason part was kind of unnecessary.

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  7. I actually love this.
    I love the idea of killer animals/ possessed animals X3 I’m working on a pasta about KrazyKat , ill tell you about her soon if you want :3

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