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The rainy week

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The first day before this horrible event.I was about to die my best freinds Seth and jack had got me a new Xbox 360 back then those were really popular . I got home around four-o-clock only to see that I had left my tv on “I’m so fucking stupid” I muderd to myself . The tv was on the 4:00 news they had said it would be rain all week and possible black outs “shit I can’t play my Xbox or lightning mite run in on it” I had sat down and wacted some shows and decided I would go on a walk even know its was raining I said what the hell so I started my useual rout around the block and when I was passing jacks house the house on the corner I saw a man with a white hoddie and black paints he seamed to be smiling but it wasn’t a uaslaul smile . His close seemed to be stained in a liquid that was washing off of him I started to get freaked out so I started going home on the way there I couldn’t stop thinking about his smile . When I got home and laid on the lazy to go up stairs to the bedroom so I turned off the lights and went to sleep but was awoken by a sudden slideing noise I grabbed the 9mm I keeped in the self for protection and went down stairs to see what our hwo made the sound I went to the kitchen only to see the same man in the corner we looked at echotheir eyes locked until he raised his hand and said GO TO SLEEP I raised the gun and trained but he moved right beside me and nocked it out of my hand without even thinking I ran out the door and went to Seth’s house only to find that he had been stabed in the chest I reached into my paints poket in my poket was my cellphone I called 911 “911 emergency what’s your trubble”  “a man is following me and I think has killed my friend  please help” ok sir what’s your loca- the phone had died I turned around seeing the man standing in the door way I bolted up the stairs and jumped off the balcony Seth had landed on feet and ran to jack was outside on the porch luckily still alive he said “you look like hammerd shit what happend Michael” no time call 911″  “why” cause a man is chasing me  just do it” “ok ” the next day searched on the Internet and found the name of my stalker Jeff the killer

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  • Mimics

    Dang spell check! Did a first grader type this?

  • The Operator

    Oh. Wow. Jeff the Killer. What a huuuuuuge suprise.

  • Phoebus

    Jeff is so über mean

  • Amnestey

    You know, for a second the title got me exited. I was thinking maybe this will be a unique idea. But no, you give us the “uaslaul” and then smack us in the face with some Jeff the killer.

    • The Operator (he’s back.)

      I need to make a pasta and name it ‘the rainy week’. It’s a fucking cool name.

      Perhaps I might actually start on making a creepypasta for once.

  • Sparkles_a23

    Serious spelling and grammar needed. And a new story.

  • Yossarian

    I never realized how much Jeff hated the XBox. I guess he’s more of a Playstation 3 guy, huh?

    • The Operator (he’s back.)

      Slenderman supports Xbox, Rake supports the Wii.

      I have said it, therefore it /must/ be canon!

  • bravo104

    “I’m so fucking stupid” I muderd to myself .

    Well done, you’re correct. and then you murder yourself! saved Jeff the trouble.

  • Alfred Frederick Dinglebottom

    Where to start…

    You murdered yourself at the start of the story. That should’ve been the end.

    I found 43 errors at a quick glance, that’s a disgrace!

    Jeff the Killer is so over done, stop it!

    The only part of this abomination that I actually enjoyed was the title. It sounded promising, what a let down!

    I believe you to be a troll. You couldn’t spell “usual” but you could spell “protection”.

    This pasta is not worth the rating that it has. Nothing inherently creepy happens. The plot is disjointed and the flow is apalling.

    1/10 and a downvote.