5/6/03
Dear Diary,
Mommy gave me you today, for my 8th birthday. She said that I can record my thoughts in here and read them when I am old like her, although she doesn’t look that old to me. When I tell her that she doesn’t look old, she just laughs and rustles my hair.
5/13/03
Dear Diary,
Sorry that I haven’t talked to you in a week, but I lost you in my room after my friends came over. I wish you could’ve experienced the fun we had.
5/15/03
Dear Diary,
At night when I go to sleep, I hear weird noises, like whispering…It scares me…
5/18/03
Dear Diary,
I hear the voices all the time now, but they are louder at night…I am scared! I don’t know what to do…I think I will tell Mommy!
5/19/03
Dear Diary,
Mommy just laughed! How dare she-? Mommy doesn’t understand the fear! She just says,”Oh silly you!” SHE DOESN’T UNDERSTAND!
5/20/03
Dear Diary,
The voices are gentle now. They tell me that everything will be okay….They tell me that they will pay!
5/21/03
Dear Diary,
The policeman came and told me that my mom was dead, and you know what? I laughed! They frowned and brought me to the white room. I HATE THE WHITE ROOM. THE VOICES TELL ME IT IS BAD. I WANT OUT!!!!!
5/22/03
Dear Diary,
They let me out of the white room. Those dumb fools. Oh well, they’re dead now, it doesn’t matter. THE VOICES…THEY ARE SO LOUD…EVERYTHING I SAY COMES OUT A SCREAM. THEY SAY THAT THEY CAN HELP ME. I AM GOING TO DO WHAT THEY SAY…(the rest is illegible)
POLICE REPORT
Kate Cosby
Age: 8 years old
Status: Dead
Cause of Death: Believed as Suicide
Report:
We found her in her kitchen with candles spread in a circle around her. She had cuts all over her body, with a stab in her chest. She was holding a bloody knife.There are no signs of struggle or a break-in, leaving us to believe it was self-harm. There are reports from her step-father that she had said something about hearing voices.
We searched through her personal belongings, and the only thing that caught our eye was a diary, which I have just read. The entries get more aggressive as they go on, the most disturbing being the last. We believe that she wrote this entry just before killing herself. The entry states something about voices, but the rest is illegible and written in blood.
Wait, do I hear voices?
The Voices,
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March 7, 2013 at 3:27 pm
Ending was predicatble. Also, by naming your “protagonist” Kate Cosby, you’ve led me to believe that she is some sort of psychotic offspring of Bill Cosby, which, in all actuality, if it ever turned out that Bill did have a crazy demon-worshipping daughter that he’s obscured from the public, I would not be surprised at all.
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March 7, 2013 at 11:57 pm
That escalated wayyy too quickly. Also, the language seemed really sophisticated for an eight year old. I wonder if it was supposed to be suggested that something was controlling her? I’m afraid that the demonic child is really such a common trope, you need a way to differentiate it.
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March 8, 2013 at 10:29 am
Another day, another crazed parent-murdering little kid. Did she have a demonic teddy bear or doll, too?
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May 20, 2013 at 5:39 pm
No, of course not, that’s just silly!
…it was a demonic security blanket.
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May 18, 2013 at 7:44 pm
I actually thought the beginning was quite good, you rushed to much author. Spend some time on it, get rid of the common parts and make it your own! That’s what writers do, we create things. Create something new!
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