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Torokk

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I woke up on a saturday morning. Got dressed, brushed my teeth, and ate breakfest. But… Something is not right… I feel someone is watching me… I tought i would go get some rest. But i can’t sleep! IT’S A NAME KEEP SHOWING UP IN MY HEAD WHEN I TRY TO SLEEP. It is… Torokk. So i Tried to tell it to my mom. But, she won’t listen! I FEEL PAIN! IT’S like i get a sign.. I don’t know! It burns! My brain! I’m getting tired. Really tired. Can’t stand it…

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12 Comments

  1. I feel like this is being shouted by a disheveled man who smells like pee standing on a street corner.

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  2. ‘It burns! My brain! I’m getting tired.’

    You just quoted everyone who had the misfortune of reading this spunk stain of a pasta. I wish I wasn’t constipated because I literally want to take a dump on it.

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  3. Its pretty hard for me to be scared of a monster that you’ve described in exactly zero detail. Like no shit your mum wouldnt listen to you, there’s no reason to be afraid of the name ‘Torokk’ yet, so why would she care?

    Also is this Torrok supposed to be some Lovecraftian thing? Or based off of the Korrok from John Dies at the End?

    I dont get it, man.

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    • Yeah, but I don’t think so, Korrok never burnt brains, just controlled cockroaches and stole cars.

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  4. It’s a feeling of hangover bro. 0/10

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  5. Nothing scary happens at all, for all we know Torokk could be benevolent, he doesn’t even appear.

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  6. I am actually surprised you were able to turn on a computer and post this, my dear author.

    This just lacks something… it’s called a story.

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  7. This is why you where put into this exact category.
    You didn’t even try.

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  8. This pasta’s logic: Wake up in the morning and do normal activities, feel like something is watching so go back to bed even though I just woke up. Tell mom about some sort of monster/being called Torokk in no detail at all then whine about how she doesn’t believe me. Yeah. That logic right there makes absolute perfect sense.

    Also, this lacked what many like to call a plot. I also found a lack of anything actually scary in this, besides the OVERUSE OF CAPSLOCK, ellipses, and poor grammar. As the category states, you didn’t even try at all.

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  9. i dont want to be this asshole, but i feel like someone has to… this fucking just flat-out sucks.

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  10. The author is torokking crap.

    1/10 and a downvote.

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  11. … … … … … … what? why is everyone looking at me that way?

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