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Where are you cubone!?, Yelled Ralts, the pokemon were in some kind of dungeon they though. All they rememberd was that they had went to lavender town and looked for cubone’s mother’s grave. Cubone fell and landed on ralts. A light was turned on by a gardevoir, and it wasent a dungeon, it was a cottage.You guys passed out.. Gardevoir explained. It was raining hard. To be countuined..

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  1. can we get some “what” and “needs more scary sauce” on this stat!

    your pasta is bad and you should feel bad, and please don’t continue

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    • You mean “please don’t countuine*”.We need to figure out if this is even pasta before we suggest adding any scary sauce.

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  2. Was this written by MS? MS was the author of Mouse House and Mouse House 2.

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  3. Stop with the Pokemon fanfiction, please.

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  4. No, this does not need to be “countuined”…

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  5. Please be trolling, please be trolling…

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  6. WTF? It didn’t even make sense! THIS BETTER BE A TROLL.

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  7. This is NOT SCARY.

    This is BAD POKEMON FANFICTION.

    This should NOT HAVE BEEN SUBMITTED TO CREEPYPASTA WIKI. MAYBE SOME KIND OF POKEMON FANFIC SITE, BUT NOT HERE.

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  8. To be continued…

    Nope. Part Two – CANCELLED.

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  9. OH SHIT! IT WASN’T A DUNGEON, IT WAS A FUCKING COTTAGE! HOLYYYY FUFCKCKCKC THAT WAS A TWIST.

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  10. Did I just read a Troll? PLEASE For THE LOVE OF GOD TELL ME THAT WAS A TROLL.

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  11. This gives me the same feeling of if someone I’m not familiar with suddenly rushes up to me, slaps me in the face, and quickly whispers “See you soon”, and dashes off all in half a second. This is exactly how this makes me feel.

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  12. Umm, obvious troll is obvious?

    But seriously, you people really need to stop wasting derpbutt’s time by posting stories like this!

    D:

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  13. shotgunfish fix your name! you left out the ‘T’.

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  14. This pasta looks like you took a tiny bit out from some other pasta or from another written work of yours,and lazily labeled it as “A New Pasta”. This isn’t even scary to begin with. Author,what was you thinking?

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  15. Can’t even be bothered to title this lump of crap, huh? Seriously, this is what toilets are for. Use them.

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  16. Oh man, I didn’t see that coming, can’t wait for part two!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Just in case you didn’t guess, that was sarcasm. Please don’t write anything ever again, not even a shopping list.

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  17. Man, the antagonist was really good and original, with such deep and complex motive, he seems like a real person.

    Oh, wait, there wasn’t one. There is precisely nothing we are meant to be scared of.

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    • But, there was Lavender Town, and rain, and a dungeon that turns out to be a cottage! How are you not scared?

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  18. I’m shakin’ in me wee booties here! Actually I’m not.

    Because there isn’t anything scary in this. At all.

    And it made no sense. At all.

    Why does this exist?

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