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Vito the killer rewritten

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3 years ago Jeff the killer struck again leaving a family dead.The only survivor was an 11 year old boy by the name of Vito Micallef. his family were all dead his father gutted,his mothers throght slit and his brother’s chest was open after he put up a fight.
vito slowly went insane,the only thing he could think about was Jeff’s face. He was paranoid and tramatised by jeff so thinking it would make everything better he took a knife and did exactly what Jeff did but had a skin coulerd face you could obviosly see it wasn’t jeff he also had eyelids
so he could blink. he took the only thing he could remember from 3 years ago:his katana and killed everyone accept a 5 year old boy in his foster home.That boy drew a vivid picture of Vito that is below. later on he went to a house somehow he felt Jeff was going there and left a note. That night Jeff killed the couple who lived there and read the note:
Jeff you remember that boy you let live its me and i’m coming for you one day you will wake up and I will thrust a Katana through your stomach and one through your eye at the same time and the last words you will hear will be Go To Sleep Jeff p.s

Vito means life so i’m gonna’ take yours… Vito the killer
Credit To – vito micallef

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  1. So, you realized the first one sucked, so you decided to make it longer, and add more suck to it? Seriously, dude, stop. Your pastas make me sad.

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  2. Oh cool a vivid picture of Vito below! I can’t wait to see it and be scared and- OH SHOCKER THERE IS NONE!

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  3. Please just give up. You can’t make this story worth submitting. Jeff the Killer and every variation of his story have been overdone and people are just sick of it.

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  4. The saddest part about this pasta is that it was “rewritten” to be worse.

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  5. Look, I appreciate that you rewrote this and even tried to incorporate some of our suggestions (no matter how badly you did), but please just stop. This goes out to every creepypasta writer out there, so listen up:

    IF YOUR IDEA FOR A CREEPYPASTA INVOLVES JEFF THE KILLER IN ANY WAY, SHAPE, OR FORM, DESTROY IT WITH FIRE.

    No more Jeff ripoffs, no more Jeff versus, no more Jefflight, NO MORE JEFF.

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    • Also, no more Jane the killer.
      Or Jim
      Or Janet
      Or Jill
      Or James
      Or Jack
      ~Continues on

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  6. Vito doesn’t mean life. Viva or vita means life.

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  7. This was actually “rewritten”? Horrifying, though probably not in the way you intended. Please, throw this one away. It’s not at all edited, even after “revision,” and it isn’t even telling a story. Sloppy, sloppy work.

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  8. Unmm

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  9. Veto means reject
    Therefore, I veto Vito.

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  10. Y u no see hes a genius stop criticizing dis awesome pasta dis is awesome i luv jeff te killler <3 lol111111111 (no.)

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  11. I think I speak for Operator, AFD, Derp, and everybody else when I say: If this is a rewrite, give up.

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