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yui’s revenge

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Ever hear of the anime called “K-on”? It’s about a group of girls who start the light music club in there high school. Personally i thought that it was a great. It wasn’t a girls anime it was more geared to boys (somewhat). So when my friend said that he bought me a dvd of it I was sort of happy because then i get to finish the series. He said that he never opened it or played with it at any time and just rushed to my house to give it to me then as he usually is just walked away.

So later that day i open the box and it had a dvd in it. It said “Yui’s revenge.” witch i thought that it was just a random typo or something. I just put it into my laptop and it seemed ok, a few commercials for new anime and manga plus a promo for the movie that they had. When it got to the menu however it seemed weird. Ritsu and Mio weren’t on there I just rubbed it off again and pushed the “play” button.

It turned out ok it played the beginning pretty well the regular happy cheerful beginning with everyone dancing on stage. Soon after everything went black except in the light of the moon we can see Yui. She was crying by the window with what looked like cuts running up and down her arm that spelled out “help. Although this was happening I kept watching thinking that the makers probably thought it would be a ok idea for a final episode for Yui to be mad or sad. she looked at the camera with tears in her brown eyes and blood on her cheeks. Suddenly the screen went dark again all then the title came out “Yui’s revenge.”?

Now i’m sure that it’s the title. pressing on I watched it as it took the time back to 3 days before the scene. Something they haven’t done before. Finally they would come up with a excuse on how come Yui was crying and had those cuts.

It started off with Yui’s sister coming into her room and waking her up and Yui just brushing her off but then getting up. Then it cut to a scene for only a few seconds. It looked like Yui impaling her sister with a guitar. Then Mio cam to the door and both Mio and Yui walked out closing the door behind them.

They walked up to Ritsu who was waiting down the street. They all smiled but Yui she had a sad face holding down her sleeve, sighing she then looked up at Mio and smiled. I thought that this story was dragging on so i decided to well fast forward to were they were in the club room. Still the same Ritsu and Mio were fighting while Mugi was giving everyone cake, and as always Azusa was getting glomped and hugged by Yui.

Then the screen went black only showing Yui sitting in a chair tears falling down. I found it a little bit odd to see but as the screen got closer to her face her eyes were Red not the brownish color that she usually had. She tore off her shirt and red lines filled her chest, arms, and neck. T-they were cuts, tears fell from her face from the pain. After about 3 1/2 hours the scene went back to her sitting in the room with everyone else, but something seemed off. She was crying but no one was helping her. I saw her take a razor out of her back pack and cut her arm and smiled then licking the blood off.

Soon Mio looked at her and sighed smacking her harder then usual leaving a big red mark. Yui got up and smack Mio back then picked up the knife Mugi used to cut the cake and rammed it into Mio’s left eye. She screamed for help but everyone was running away. I couldn’t help but throw up as Yui stabbed Mio’s stomach open and her guts pouring out. Later Yui picked up her guitar and walked to were Ritsu was hiding.

Yui now having a demonic smile put the guitar to Ritsu’s head and with one swing decapitated her. Yui then walked to the teachers lounge and stabbed everyone. She walked up to Nodoka and smiled. “I’m sorry but no one can hear you” She stabbed her and bit off her ear leaving blood falling to the floor.

I could barely watch anymore I fast forward it to the end were Yui was standing at the window smiling. Her sister was on the ground trying to keep from throwing up after what Yui told her she did. Yui softly kissed her sister then stabbed her 16 times.

3 weeks later I had gotten a letter in the mail. It said: I’m sorry Joshua but you need to be kept quiet.

since that letter and the movie I learned my friend committed suicide by handing himself from the bridge. I burned the movie and everything that I had that was related from “K-on”. Sometimes when I fall asleep I can hear the screams of them fading away.

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  1. I found it ironic that he was just fast-forwarding through the episode due to the gore, because I found myself skimming ahead due to the awful cliches. To be fair though, now I’m curious as to see K-On… oh, not because this story gave such a compelling story, but because I’ve heard about it before and this just reminded me of it.

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    • yea, xD i sucked at this but i loved k-on so >.> decided to write a story about it xD

      i’ll try harder next time :I

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  2. SQUIDWARDS SUICIDE HASH!!!! MICROWAVED ALFREDO!!!! THE NOODLES ARE UNDER COOKED!!!!! THE PASTA TASTE LIKE SOMETHING I FOUND IN THE GUTTER!!! oops caps. Nah i didn’t mean that. it was good but a somewhat shabby and dark. nevah herd of k-on dow so the charecters sounded like a bunch o looneys with pink hair from that show jessie and the pussy cats I LOLED ALL THE WAY THROUGH!!!

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    • yea o.o everytime i make a creepy pasta it becomes a gore fest and very dark >o<

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  3. Personally i thought that this psata was a great.

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